Bored in the blackout

This is a seine that's in a story that I'm going to wright in the summer. Here is when they're having a blackout in the middle of a large thunder storm.

The story is about when Mayl and her family is on vacation for a week. A few days after they left the house, someone had hacked into Mayl's computer and sends nasty messages to Lan and his friends. Worried of what's going on, Lan and Megaman goes to her house to see what's going on, but it's not what they expected and found that a hacker is on the lose on Mayl's computer! They have to stop the hacker, but the hacker has other things on his mind..........

*Edit: I noticed that it's kinda hard to read what Megaman said, so I fixed it.